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Craig C. Shelton's avatar

Excellent.

Jason Alan Snyder's avatar

Denver, this is the most generous kind of disagreement there is, and the torch is a genuinely better teaching object than my lantern for the question you are asking. "Incompetence is morally mute. Competence is morally eloquent." I will be quoting that with your name attached.

You are right about the handle. Righter than you know: my essay called it the meter, and the grasping paragraph was about the people who want to be one. The watching was never in the fence. Agreed, fully.

One pushback, and it is the machine itself. The torch this summer put in people's hands is a file on an offline laptop. No wire, no retention, no dossier, because there is nowhere for any of it to go. The deed does not just remove the meter. It severs the handle. Which means your framework does not defeat my essay's argument; I think it completes it. The reason to hold the weights was never mainly the fence.

That deserves more than a comment, so a fuller reply is coming.

Thank you for reading me this closely. It is the best thing one writer can do for another!

JAS

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